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Esmee
Dec 12, 2011 22:23:51 GMT -5
Post by ♞DEUCE on Dec 12, 2011 22:23:51 GMT -5
PENDING ! I only have one little thing to nitpick about, and you're good! c:
If she's fragile/weak, then how does she have a strong bite? Please edit to make her physical strengths make sense, and everything will be good :) |
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Esmee
Dec 12, 2011 23:19:59 GMT -5
Post by yelloweyez on Dec 12, 2011 23:19:59 GMT -5
[Edited!] haha oopse, I guess I looked over that when I made her, Thanks! everything should look pretty good now =)
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Esmee
Dec 13, 2011 18:01:26 GMT -5
Post by ♛ R∑AGAL on Dec 13, 2011 18:01:26 GMT -5
Her eyes may not be yellow to start out.
And how many characters do you have now?
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Esmee
Dec 13, 2011 18:06:55 GMT -5
Post by yelloweyez on Dec 13, 2011 18:06:55 GMT -5
I actually looked up red wolves and they do have natrual yellow eyes, ( www.boomerwolf.com/redcors.htm)but if you don't want me to do that, then I can change them to brown. And I have 6, but I take care of all of them~ |
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Esmee
Dec 13, 2011 18:11:56 GMT -5
Post by ♛ R∑AGAL on Dec 13, 2011 18:11:56 GMT -5
Well "Yellow" is an unnatural color. If you want that kind of lightness, please put something like "Amber", or purchase eye dye.
And I wouldn't really do many more. That's an awful lot.
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Esmee
Dec 13, 2011 18:13:07 GMT -5
Post by yelloweyez on Dec 13, 2011 18:13:07 GMT -5
[edited]
Alrighty, no problem, and this was probably going to be my last one anyway, thanks~
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