Luna \*Feline*/

[luna]

don't be scared:
i've done this before:

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-------------------------------------Luna-------------------------------------
Female
5 months

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Species: Snow Leopard


Height: 12 in tall (to shoulders)
Weight: 40 lbs
Build: Thick and sturdy
Pelt: Silver with dark grey/black spots
Eyes: Grey
Scars: none


Appearance: Luna is a sleek Snow Leopard with large, soft paws and wicked claws. Her coat is silvery and reflects any light source.

Rank: Warrior (in training sort of...shes still a cub yet.)


Likes:

• Playing
  
• Soft things
  
• Peace

Dislikes:

• War
  
• Being corrected
  
• Dictatorship/total power

Ambitions:

• To be respected

Fears:

• Total power
  
• Cliffs

Emotional Strengths:

• Courage
  
• Loyalty

Physical Strengths:

• Claws
  
• Flexibility

Emotional Weaknesses:

• Lack of pride
  
• Selflessness(includes concern for her opponent)

Physical Weaknesses:

• Size (small)
  
• Her nose (SUPER sensitive)

Personality: She is very bright and cunning. Her wits are always at her paws. She is curious and kind.

History: Luna was found on the Outskirts of the Feline Kingdom, the edge of the Canine Kingdom. Nobody knew who she was, nor where she came from. But she had gotten acceptance into the Feline Kingdom.

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What can we call you? Kayla
How long have you been Role Playing? 3 yearsish
How did you find The Regals? Through other RP sites, affiliates & such
How often are you online? Every day/every other day
What other characters do you have? Castic(female Coyote)

[♛ R∑AGAL]

A few things..

Firstly, I don't believe we can have "Oracles in training". There is only one oracle at a time. If you want to change her so that she is a warrior (what you claim she wants to be), then that is fine.

Secondly, her history and personality are awfully similar. The stuff about her being found on the outskirts needs to be removed from her personality, since that has nothing to do with personality. And likewise, the notes about her warm heart, etc, need to be removed from her history, as that has nothing to do with her past.

Lastly, her emotional weaknesses clash. You cannot say that she has a small ego, but then say she has a pride issue. And even if you mean that she has a lack of pride, you really can't repeat the same thing twice (small ego and lack of pride are basically identical).

Thanks!

[luna]

~edited~

[♛ R∑AGAL]

Thanks! Accepted!