Sereena DONE!

[cheezit]

turn me loose--it's now or never:
feel like i could run forever:

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take my chances on a blue horizon:[/right][/blockquote]

-------------------------------------Sereena-------------------------------------
female
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Species: Horse
Breed: Arabian


Height: 15.0
Weight: 900
Build: light
Coat: bay
Mane/Tail: black
Eyes: brown
Scars: ---


Appearance: Sereena is a normal shade of bay, with deep brown eyes. She has black feet/stockings, and black at the end of her muzzle.

Rank: Servant


Likes:

• water
  
• playing
  
• running

Dislikes:

• walking
  
• restraints
  
• the dark

Ambitions:

• to be a strong, happy dam with a healthy family

Fears:

• snakes
  
• trouble

Emotional Strengths:

• never giving up
  
• socialness

Physical Strengths:

• rock climbing
  
• stamina
  
• speed

Emotional Weaknesses:

• easily frightened
  
• curious

Physical Weaknesses:

• light build
  
• (I pondered this for a looonngg time) can't carry much

Personality: ---


History: When Sereena was just a foal, her parents left her. She wandered and wandered, sometimes teaming with other herds. One herd even accepted her as servant, which gave her experience. Sereena soon found herself here in The Regals.

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you ain't seen nothing yet

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What can we call you? Cheezy
How long have you been Role Playing? 2 years!
How did you find The Regals? A Sunset Ride
How often are you online? Unless I'm grounded...everyday.
What other characters do you have? NONE DX

[♕ ISABELLA!]

Hello! Welcome to The Regals, Cheezy~!

First, you've mentioned a "Sacra" in the appearance instead of "Sereena". Oops?

I'd appreciate it if you'd fill out at least one ambition. It's basically a goal--what does Sereena want out of life? Sometimes creating a personality helps figure that out (though creating one is not necessary.)

Third, at The Regals, no one knows about humans. It's an alternate universe. So please replace that with something else. (:

Also, could you please create a more thorough history? All you really have to do is talk about her mother, father, childhood...perhaps take a look at other bios to see what is common in a history? I just feel as though the history's rather bare; it isn't telling us anything.

[♛ R∑AGAL]

Once more, "none" is not a rank.